Cupcake Present

I think this is really cute! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g…" width="17" height="15" alt="" title="Giggle"/>
I think that the shading is actually really well done! There are a few spots though where I wish it were a little darker i.e. the underside of the hair by the neck, the shadow right under her on the cupcake (since when you make a shadow, it's usually very dark) unless there's multiple light sources, but I think there's only one and it's to the left. Which also points out that the hair looks really nice in texture, but I think that the main highlight you have should be bigger where the light source is, and smaller where the light source is further away, if that makes sense.

(for the ratings, I put 4 stars for all of them since I think that it was kind of original, and cute, besides the fact that a lot of cute things explore sweets and such. Also, the impact and vision was less because the background seems a little off to me, but I wasn't sure what to say about it because I don't know what else you could have done...)

Besides those things, I think it's really cute and that you did a really great job!
Especially with the textures of the coloring! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt="" title="Clap"/>
(sorry if I sound mean! D: )